Prose characteristics of Zhu Ziqing

A large number of overlapping sound use of the word



Liu Xie strongly advocated by stacked-word, he said: " 'Zhuozhuo' with a fresh peach, 'Yi' to the old willow, 'Gao Gao' capacity for the sunrise, 'shenlu shenlu' to the wind and snow-to less Total, just exhaustive profile situation. "(" Wenxindiaolong - to identify ") overlapping sound natural, would increase the beauty of music, read Lang Lang missing you, beautiful sounds crisp, with the ease of mind, Mr. Zhu Ziqing in a large number of essays Permian-use of the word, it is Mubuxiajie, each with its wealth of expression.



"Grass Lizuan out secretly from the soil, Nennen, the Lvlv." ( "Spring") "secretly" wrote a grass unknowingly, unconsciously growth, the lovely and lively. "Nennen", "Lvlv" from the texture, color accurately both wrote the characteristics of early spring grass. "Fengqing quietly, Ruan Mianmian the grass." ( "Spring") people appreciate endless, not people enjoy.



"Green" wrote: "come to the hillside, heard the voice of Flower Flower." This pleasant-sounding acoustic, to give Yuyunniaoniao beauty. That there are "slightly" clouds, "oil" green "flash" green, "a 4.5-Bi" Tan Bian, "Hua Hua" of bright green, wrote the gentle Modal the United States, people A delicate, transparent texture, but also to speed the tempo, the style Qinglang.



"Moonlight in the Lotus Pond" good at using the word Xie Jing-stacked bar, described a beautiful picture: "Qu tortuous pack" of Hawthorn, "light" and "quietly" Moonlight, "Tian-tian", "Maxine Hong Kingston "And" layers "of the lotus leaf," repeatedly "Hexiang," thin "Green Fog," Yinyinyueyue "Yuan-Shan…… All this demonstrated the Qingyou quiet mood, the author of the blend Yin Yin, boredom of Xin Xu.



"Venice" wrote: "Water is far from a phase grounding days, a vast. Here there is no soot, the sky clean." Stack-the use of the word, reflecting the Venice of the beautiful, it is a highlight of the city water . There are "slightly", "Yan Yan" "has always been" "Shushuluoluo" strengthens the language of rhythm.



Second, the choice of the verb Jingdang



French writer Gustave Flaubert for his students Maupassant said: "Whatever you say what is really able to demonstrate it's only a sentence, the real application of the verb and adjective and only one, is that the most accurate one, The most accurate of a verb and adjective. But many other similar. And you only need this sentence, the only verb, adjective only to find out. "Mr. Zhu Ziqing is doing so, he used the verb On the serious consideration, showing a deep knowledge of language.



"Grass Lizuan out secretly from the soil." ( "Spring") "drill" used to be people's tricks, ground-breaking performance of grass and the crowded Jin Sheng, was full of vigor, full of vibrant life. If the "long", the Tai Su, the only general statement, not performance of the vitality of grass. "The bees spend the next Chengqianchengbai Wengweng De Naozhao." ( "Spring") "to seek" not only write a humming sound, showing a boiling spring faction of the lively scene of the city, indeed in a "trouble" Word, but to the entire state.



"Provides some background," wrote his father to climb the platform to buy oranges scenes moving. "I saw him stumble to come…… Railway side, who slowly on exploration, not disaster but he across the railway, to climb up the other platforms, not easily. Panzhao he used both hands above, the two Feet upward to shrink; his body fat left-dumping, showing efforts to look like. "This is a feature of the camera, to the author


Also to the readers left a profound impression, "stumble" wrote his father's not flexible. "Pan" shows the high degree of the platform, showing a father's difficult. "Shrink" written in detail, I can see a father's heavy physical boost difficult. This effort, the father also why I bought orange » Because the love of anxious, on the other hand reflects the author's heartfelt tribute to his father. This describes the action, both delicate and concise. Ye Shengtao old man "provides some background," a high degree of rating: "This article Tongti clean, no excess, no superfluous words. Even if an 'a' word, an 'a' word, but also must be used before."



"The Pavilion Ju highlight of the iceberg in the rock, from top to bottom are the Kong Konger." ( "Green") to write dynamic static, a "Ju" wrote the words to live Mei Yuting, also highlighted the dangerous momentum here. "That enchanting Green! I think that if you take the CD,…… I think that if you Yi eyes,…… I Yong Shoupai of you, with your Fumo,…… I Ju you import, is Wenzhao She has. "(" Green ") from the Green deeply loved, feelings have reached a climax, between hope so, can not help but dance of hand, foot of the dancing, sword of, the Fumo, a kiss, intoxicated with them. "Moonlight in general water, diarrhea in this quietly and take a leaf." ( "Moonlight in the Lotus Pond") moonlight like pouring water in general, a "crash" the word strengthened sense of the flow of moonlight, appropriate image, vivid . If the change "as" word, Tai Su, and the water is not Reference, nor dynamic. "Wanwan the willow the sparse Qianying, but like the lotus leaf painted on." ( "Moonlight in the Lotus Pond") This is the masterpiece of nature, a "painting" the words not only highlights the willow shadow of the United States, also expressed the author The feeling of love.



Third, the large-scale use of fresh appropriate analogy



Qing Dynasty scholar Chen Deqian said: "See-odd characters, often see the word insurance, Chen see the new word, the word Park see color." Commonplace things, Mr. Zhu Ziqing Xinshounianlai, wrote the article, the use of live, see the new. "Spring" written flower diversity, variety Yanli, the linked three metaphors, "like the red fire, like Xia powder, white as snow," the mobilization of the rich imagination of readers, played a very good expression effects. Wrote on wild flowers, "scattered in bushes, like the eyes, like stars, but also blink blink ah," not only write covered with the plants as much as wilderness, but also depicted glittering gently swinging the Ming color of wild flowers. Chun-Yu wrote, "as Niumao, like flower-like filaments," the three wrote by all directions close analogy, shiny, slender features. Kong Ling of the spring is, is difficult to write the King, but the author of "difficult to write with the King as in the present, not the views of the Yan Wai" (Ouyang Xiu "June 1 Poetry"), he said: "spring Xianggang Floor child, from head to toe are new, she grew. Spring as the young girl, Huazhizhaozhan, with a smile, walked. Spring as healthy young people, there are iron-clad arms, legs and waist, showed we approached To. "Seize the author of the body and the similarity between the metaphor, he described by the spring of people to feel, it is flu. Bi Yuju three were prominent in the spring of fresh, beautiful, with the intensity of three features, praise the spring thriving vitality.



"Green" is the metaphor as much as 20. As the rainy season in the Green Lake than for a great great lotus leaves, words, words and enchanting, its singular statement. Tam Mei again as a Green than the melting of the blue days, highlighting its Xianrun. The paper also with the way Bo Yu, multi-angle, multi-dimensional characteristics of a green, "she easily tie with the wrinkles, like the young woman towing Qunfu She Huahua in the bright, like Tu of the 'oil-ming' general , As an egg-soft, tender as her children without some miscellaneous dust Zi, a Wenrun Wanran the jasper, only the Yise Qingqing, - but you have Kan Butou her! "From the visual, touch, feel and so on Reproduces the image in the Green blend, bright, Ruannen, pure features, performance most vividly.



"Moonlight in the Lotus Pond" in the lotus leaf to a Maxine Hong Kingston's dancers in skirts, given the dynamic lotus leaves the United States. Lotus "As a Lili pearl, and if Bi Tian, the stars", highlighting its crystal flashes faint flicker characteristics. "A gentle breeze, sent Lvlv Qingxiang, as if the distant tower on the bleak songs like" he said. "Tong in the moonlight is not uniform, but Guangyu Ying harmony with the melody, such as the Vatican E-ling


Zouzhe on the music. "The sense of smell, visual into a hearing, to which the internal harmony of the U.S. performance in the right. Moonlight to a flow again, the invisible people in the moonlight, the actual physical sense, not only can see the moonlight, but also by touch.



"Venice" Even with the first paragraphs of the four metaphor: "through the Grand Canal in Venice, as written by anti-S, this is Main Street. Another 418 small river, which is small alley. Vessels such as buses, in the streets On the go. "Analogy to the Venice of the river network in full display, seemingly land and waters in reality, this highlights the city's" unique. "



Fourth, the use of modern spoken vocabulary



A - Tolstoy said: "Literature is the language of a case." Wang Guowei very respected Yuan Dynasty, it is because the Yuan Dynasty "nature of Yanguan, Yanqing nature of the tongue", "a reference to matter if I Also. " Mr. Zhu Ziqing also very good at using spoken language to write essays, rather talk wind. "Park yard, field, to Look, a large area, an area full of the. Sitting, lying down, playing two rolling, kicking the ball Jijiao, who ran several times, catching several times Micang." ( "Spring ") As the author and readers face-to-face conversation. "Peach, apricot, pear, do you not let me, I will not let you are full of the children spend time trip." ( "Spring") by refining love with the spoken language writing, reading to welcome fresh, warm nature. "Lovely, I will be comparable to what you do« I compare how come? »" "I could not bear you, I am willing to how you do» "" I give you a name, I told you from this' daughter Green ', okay »" ( "Green") by using words such as understand the spoken language of modern writing, full of praise can be seen on the Green,like it most, the author has incorporated into the green, readers have been infected. "Venice" narrative and also spent a lot about the modern plain speaking, such as "Where it all," and "Venice is not the bridge, 378, and some," "out of Mingshou also taste."



5, the appropriate integration of classical Chinese words



"Provides some background," his father wrote "impressive Shanghuai, natural conditions can not be themselves. Yu in the situation, naturally, on the outside of the family often frivolous touch his anger." Language solemn, on his father's memory of the feelings Yiyuyanbiao. "Green" launched at the end of a rich imagination, "the enchanting Green! I think that if you take the CD, I will be given to the lightweight dancers; she will be able Lin Feng cited Gone with the Wind. I think that if you Yi eyes, I will be the gift of good songs blind girl and she will be able Mingmou a good Lai. "Sentence neat, filled with feelings. "Venice" is "a combination of solemn, Miao," "Code Li Fenghua to win", "Tang Huang blur of the flu" and other expressions, so that language more Xilian.







"Language is the first element of Literature" (Gorky language) Zhu Ziqing prose of a high degree of artistic achievement and his language is inseparable from the self-cultivation. He is "May 4" since the text weighed one of the most capable writers, formed its own unique style. He did not hand kneading Zhuangshu, Zhang Zhuo Thai sentence; he Qufa natural, natural. His prose such as Waterlilies, Qingli elegant; popular water sports such as natural fluency. Li Guangtian in the "Selected Works of Zhu Ziqing," the preface said: "At that time the writers, some from the old camps in the past, often banal gas; some from foreign countries, often have too much Yang Qi, in particular, are often brought Western end of the century decadent atmosphere. Mr. Zhu is not, his works began on the establishment of a pure and simple a fresh style. "Mr. Zhu Ziqing our grasp of the language of prose that five characteristics, we can appreciate the unique style of their works.